My visual poem is about adventures. I chose the topic adventures because I can relate to that topic because my family and I travel a lot and we discover new things on each adventures. The visuals makes an impact by helping the viewers of my visual poem picture the words that I am saying throughout the poem! Also i think the visuals will help the viewers of the visual poem understand what the poem is trying to explain. What the poem was trying to explain is that go on more adventures and see where it takes you.
I think that one way the speacial effects affect the meaning of it is that the speacial effects gives kinda a like relaxing mood because of the sounds of nature and the other places you see throught the visual poem. The meaning behind adventuring is the point when you reach your destination you have this relaxing sensation! One way the audience could get affected by this visual poem is that they can feel relaxed because that is the whole meaning behind this poem. Also I think that the places u see can affect you to actually try to go there. Adventuring could also be near or far and sometimes you don't have to leave home at all!
I am not that satisfied with my result because the voice over was alittle bit not well orginized and practiced. Also although my pictures came from my phone and was editing the over film was not well put together! One thing I could have done better was not rushing And using my time wisely. Another thing that I could have done better is the quality of my work.and lastly the very last thing I could have done better is the editing, the editing was not perfect and I think I could have done better if I explored new things throught the editing system.
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ReplyDeletegood lyrics
ReplyDeletea little too loud
good visuals
I like the shots
ReplyDeleteYou can see part of the A-Roll behind the picture in some cases
The song in the backround was really cool.
Compliment:Gotta admit, that b-roll was some neat stuff...
ReplyDeleteCriticism:The audio was cut up to pieces
Compliment: The music was very zen! (although too overpowering)
Really good audio levels !
ReplyDeleteYou stuttered a lot in the audio.
Really good B-Roll !!! :)
Very clear audio!!
ReplyDeleteLower your music little bit!
I like it!!
Compliments: Good Applicable audio
ReplyDeleteCriticism: Weird pauses
Compliment: Amazing visuals
I like the b-roll of the sunset.
ReplyDeleteYou could have used more kinds of b-roll. (make sure you take the photos)
I like the words you used.
Like the back-round noise
ReplyDeleteA little bit of stuttering
good shots
I liked the shot of the sunset! It's a little loud. I really like the picture of the water droplets of the grass it was really nice!
ReplyDeleteI like the music in the back round.
ReplyDeleteI think one thing that could be better is to fix the voiceover because you stuttered at times.
I also like how you go the shot of the sunset.
Compliment: I liked your shots and effects.
ReplyDeleteCriticism: You didn't use pictures that were yours and that kinda took away the mood.
Compliment: I like the way your poem was recited
Liked the lyrics to the poem.
ReplyDeleteYou could see the background behind the pictures, the music was too loud, and only five pictures.
I liked the ending picture.
I like the shot of the sunset
ReplyDeleteYou could of had more b roll and the sound could have been balanced
Your shot of the waterfall was very cool
it has good voice over
ReplyDeletethe music is to loud and covers audio
has good pictures of adventure
The background music was really relaxing. Could have turned it down a little because it was kind of loud. Love all of your visuals
ReplyDeletegood b-roll
ReplyDeletelittle to loud with music
good voice over
I really liked your b-roll you had really great photos!
ReplyDeleteFor some of the photos you need to stretch them out acroos the screen the slightest bit more. We could see you reciting your poem in the background and it was really distracting.
Other than that, you had a great poem! really creative topic!
Love the pictures
ReplyDeleteAudio was TOO LOUD
Nicely done jaesha
great japanese intro
ReplyDeletegreat voice
there should be more picturexs
i liked your music.
ReplyDeletecould have cut out your stumbles.
good shots
Your music matches very well with your poem! You didn't very much b-roll that fit the screen.. Really great, clear audio of your poem!
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful visuals
ReplyDeleteVoice over was not practiced and you paused a lot throughout the poem
Music was nice throughout the poem also
I liked the ending picture, it's a really nice sunset.
ReplyDeleteThe audio was kinda loud, and you can see the A-Roll
I like the waterfall picture too. Breathtaking
Compliment: I liked that your audio was clear and easy to understand.
ReplyDeleteCriticism: Some of the pictures that you used weren't yours.
Compliment: I also liked the poem itself. It was very good.
Very Descriptive
ReplyDeleteMusic could be softer
Really nice pictures
Awesome writing!! Beautiful pictures in that visual poem of yours!:)
ReplyDeleteAwesome writing!! Beautiful pictures in that visual poem of yours!:)
ReplyDeleteAwesome writing!! Beautiful pictures in that visual poem of yours!:)
ReplyDeleteAwesome writing!! Beautiful pictures in that visual poem of yours!:)
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